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Being Edited!

Okay, so I majorly, majorly revised this piece as of December 22. It's kind of long so I've attached it in a word document below. I would really appreciate your ...

I'm totally in on this one! Good idea LilyReagan!!!! Name: Andrea Stalwart Gender: Female Age: 20 Race: elf Choose one: (Heliopian) or (New Arrival) : Heliopian Appearance: Bright red frizzy ...

Hey again ashley! Here's my crit! I hope it helps! Sorry it took so long :-) Sorry it took me so long to put this on here...I've been SUPER busy! ...

Hey Pawprint! I'm Scasha! Anyway here's my review crit: Red = Comments Bold = words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this thing. Chapter ...

Hey Mateeah3! I decided to backtrack and crit this one! Let's do it. Woo! I finally post something new! I'm not sure if it is very good yet because I ...

Hey again mateeah3! you left me hanging with the supsense on the last chapter so I decided to see what this one had in store for us! As for titles, ...

Hey Chocoholic! Scripts aren't generally my area of expertise so feel free to shoot down any of my suggestions. Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've ...

Hey mateeah3! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this thing! I know, it is ...

Hey note to self! Welcome to YWS! Here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = words I've inserted that I think work better Let's do this thing! While all ...

Hey happybear, Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Stuff I've inserted that I think sounds better Let's do this thing! A wail sounded in the usualy quiet ...

Hey! If you could look at my "The Duty" chapters, that would be awesome. You can do any of them I don't really care I just want feedback!

Hey again Ashley! Here's my review! Hope it helps! Okay, I know that I haven't fixed Chapter 5 yet, and I normally do that before I post another chapter. But ...

Hey CrazyBob! Welcome to YWS! Anyway here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = word I've inserted that I think would work better Let's do this thing. My father ...

Hey everyone! Okay so recently I watched the movie/documentary called Sharkwater. It was an insanley good and eyeopening film so I decided to write a story to go along with ...