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Hey Ygaron! here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better. let's do this thing! In the cold, dark alley, a small ...

Your site was super cool! Congrats on the PUSH thing!!! That's Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry I'm bumping this. I really need reviews because I majorly, MAJORLY edited it! It's almost a whole different story. Please R and R! I would love you forever.

I loved this book too! Did you get to read the sequel? The barcode Revolution (I think that's the name). I got my sister to read it. I love books ...

Hey Ashley! I'm so happy you put out this chapter! Anyway, here is my crit! Hope it helped. Okay, I know that it has been a long time since I ...

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Thanks so much Stella! I'll definitley work on it!!!

Hey again Jamie! Here's my crit! OK, this is just an idea that popped into my head one night, so even I don't think it's all that great. I wanted ...

Hey sorry, I didn't know how to reinsert this into my previous post, so I just made a new one. Anyway, onto my critique! Sorry it took me FOREVER to ...

Hey ashley! I've reserved this spot for me, I'll comment/review this prologue after I get back from dropping my little sister off at summer school. Are you thinking of continuing ...

I read it Jamie! heheh I used to be an Army brat :-) My dad was a doctor in the military because they paid for his medical school. I was ...

Hey onceuponatim3! Since you've been critting my The Duty stuff which I really appreciate, I decided to give this another look. Let's see how your edits went :-) So, if ...

Hey Stella! I'm scasha! Can you please please please critique this story: The Protectors of Gaia ? It's not fantasy fiction, I put it under other fiction, it's closer to ...

Hey Talking Pinata! Let's see what you have in store for us. Same crit key as always! The half moon hung in the sky like some great celestial yin-yang. Four ...

Hey again! Let's see what you got! All right...I need harsh critiques now because this is my first love scene (kind of) in my story, so I need peoples' honest ...