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Re: Seventeen Magazine
Hi Everyone! So I've entered in the Seventeen Magazine short fiction contest and I need your help. If you can, please go to the link below and register on the ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Blog About Academic Subjects
Hey Everyone! So I just got a job at as a blogger and I was hoping all of you could help me out by visiting and/or commenting on my blog. ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Public School vs. Home School
I was homeschooled through fifth grade and then I transferred to a private school. My parents homeschooled me because the schools that were available on the army bases where I ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Done! Who's next?
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Running With Wolves Ch. 1
Hey Zoorah12!!! I'll be your reviewer for the day!! Let's see what you've got! The first chapter of my working novel. I know that it does not reflect the title ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Trick Prologue
Back again! Let's see how you've done!!!! Swords clashed, sending sparks cascading through the night air as battle cries peeled out like broken bells from every corner of the valley. ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: N/A
Hi Teardrop on fire! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for the day! This is a small part of writing I need feedback on for form and wording (if ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Trick Prologue
Hey Pandapez!!! Welcome to YWS! Let's see what you've got! Swords clashed, sending sparks cascading through the night air as battle cries peeled out like broken bells from every corner ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: The Underwater Guardian
Ashleylee : Thank yo so much! That review definitley went above and beyond what I requested! You are amazing! *hugs*.
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Broken Vow; Ch. 1
Hey Ashley! Here to review draft two! Chapter One: One year previous… “…Back to the street, back to the place Back to the room where it all began Back to ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
Hey Again Lost in Dreamland, Would you totally mind doing this one: ? It's long and I don't really want any grammatical nitpicks because I can try and find them ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Hey Again Fellow! I'm sorry if I'm asking you again for a critique! Anyway here's the link: It's a bit long so I'll totally donate points if you do it ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Just To Be Cold--1940
Hi ChernobyllyInclined! I'll be your reviewer today! let's do this thing! It's horribly short, but I felt like asking you to wonder if I had any potential. I already have, ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Thank you both! I'll definitley look into your comments and edit my story! Cheers!
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
I would love you forever if you could sink your teeth into my piece and absolutly rip it to shreds!
Dec 21, 2008