scarlettshimmer

Thank you for the comment. This piece does have a lot of errors, mainly because it's an old piece that I fixed up. This was originally a fluff piece for ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

I love your ideas for this novel. It is something I would totally read in my spare time. Not too many errors as far as grammar and spelling, but other ...

Awesome, thanks again for the feedback.

Thanks so much for commenting. Also, just note that this was a fluff piece i wrote for an English class I had last year, so I tried to fix it ...

I love it! The suspense is paced very well, and I like how you used different and interesting vocabulary to describe emotions. Very minor punctuation and grammar problems, just some ...