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Your comment was overall insulting. By the way, this is the main character's insight not mine. And I mentioned in the description of this work, that this is actually Not ...

Thank you very much! I went through your review and the piece;your suggestions worked great. I'll definitely go back and correct the minor errors.

Thank you, yes this is one of my first poems so I am still trying to figure out how to create more solid patterns in my writing. Thank you for ...

Thank you, I will be sure to edit it once I get the chance! And I was thinking of question marks, but chickened out because I thought they would disrupt ...

Thank you!

Thanks! I wasn't exactly sure myself, haha. My initial thought was that it would develop into a novel of some sort but for now I haven't dedicated the time to ...

Thank you! I totally what you get by lack of a pattern, I actually only dibble dabble in poetry and have had trouble created a solid rhythm. I can only ...

Hi thank you! I was going to include it in the description but they have a character limit. My purpose for the italics lay behind the theme of addiction: A ...

Thank you, I love making the readers think. :)

Thank you, and yes I would rather prefer some constructive criticism instead of someone rushing to get points, but thank you for your opinion. I'm truly glad you enjoyed it!