sazza_1996

Hey, this was a really great poem and I really enjoyed it!! Keep it up!! :)

Hey, that was really well written and I really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you changed from his drunken night to his day at work!!! Keep it up! :)

Its well written written for a new member!! :)

Its really good. Though if the boy was wearing an iron mask he wouldn't be able to lift his face or see out of it because iron is really heavy ...

Well. all I can say is that it was really well written. It has a really nice rhythm and I really enjoyed reading it! :)

When I need him I'll tell you! :)

It was not a rhyming poem and it sounds like the sharacter is thinking and wondering how blue birds fly and to where when they are gonig through a tough ...

It would be better if you told it was a pig at the start because it sounded like an army poem, until the very last lines when you finally told ...

Saving a spot for a female killer. I'll post my profile later. :D

It was really well written and the old english language you used was really good how you you used it. Keep it up!!

I loved the poem! But can I just say would it be better on the 7th line you could have said 'move slowly' insted of slowly move' I'm just saying ...

Is anyone going to post, I'm only posting if someone else posts.

All I can say is.. well.. it was wow and very well written. :)

It was really well written. I can't exactly find very much wrong with it... but capitalise the first letter of every sentence. :)

Well, this is really well written but don't forget to capitalise the first letter in every sentence apart from that it was really good! :)