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i like it, but its a little confusing. I hope your enjoying YWS by the way. This prolouge didnt really catch my attention however. It was slightly boring, and thus ...

I have to agree with the others who replied to this story. Its a major run off of the lord of the rings. Its a good story,but i think thats ...

Well, youve deffinately gotten the rift of the site by now i hope! As its seems, everybody loves the site, and thats because its utterly AMAZING! Im convinced your going ...

I must admit, it makes me sad to hear you voted for David Cook. David A. (sorry, i dont think i can spell his name, no matter how many times ...

Deffinately one of the better biginnings to stories that ive read. I must admit, it seems a little far fetched that he would be found had he really run that ...

Ok, first things first. A few things that confused me. The room Harry had entered was Room of Requirement Snape. IM not completely sure what this is supposed to mean, ...

Hopefully you plan on continuing this story, or else i will be burning with questions for the time being. Where did she get the fever? Just a coincidence that her ...

The elf swiftly and silently climbed up the towering oak, using even the pettiest of branches to elevate him up. Two small silver scythes hung around his waist, covered in ...

Generally, i just read the first few paragraphs, and stop because they tend to be too long. This on the other hand, hooked me from the very beginning. I had ...

Hey, great prolouge. I had a few things i didnt like though. You might add in who it is they are running from, bandits, or soldiers? I might also put ...

Id have to agree whit Psyichic Ninja about the little 'pic' part of the song, but other than that, and a few other wierd wordings, i thought it was awsome.

* Well thanks to the consent of Alice and Bella, im now officially part of this sb. Though theres not much a point of me saying that because only the ...

"IT SMILES!" yelled Slade. *sorry, all i got*

The smell of the pickle started to make Slade gag. Throwing up in his mouth, he went to the toilet and spit it out. "We need to get that smell ...

*yeah i noticed. So does slade still remember colt too?*