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I like how 'like shadow twit said' expressed brads anger, and the language, kinda falls into the scene for me, i deffinatly see myself screaming my head off if that ...

poor Brad! You should keep the dragons in the story for later, like they grow and come to brads aid or something? Its turning into an awsome book!!

Kitty seems to be very good at editing things! well, once again, it was a great success of a short story, are you going to make it all into a ...

OOOH!! i like the ending 'A fight to the death' it makes more tension for the next, i love it!

Wow, keep it up, these are really good! i cant believe i havnt found it in a bookstore yet!! you should try to get it published!

Wow, nice beginning, and, just like Shadowsun said, mercanaries with wings, an awsome new idea! im glad you kept going with it!

this is really good, you should really keep going with it. Just work on the ending, it was kinda qwick, but keep up the good work!!! it was awsome!

Wow, hardcore! Are you continueing with this? Cause you really should!! Its one of the best short stories i have ever read! Make it so shes not dead, and shes ...

THat was suprisingly good, not that your not good, i wouldnt know, but that was quite an amazingly good story. Are you going to continue with it? was that the ...

That was really good. IM not very good at reviewing, but that i thought, was a really good story!! You should keep going with it though, like what happens to ...

You know many would consider the human race extinct, but I know better. You see, Helion believes he is the last human being on Earth. But soon he will find ...

'Hmmm'thought Slade,'well this is interesting, what to do, should i get out while i can, this way they wont know who i really am, or do i take the safe ...

"Well that was fun."Calder grunted, after getting up."You think it was funny lindsay? Try to be on the bottom next time!" but he couldnt help laughing while looking at Lindsay, ...

** :roll: hiya sorry i havnt posted much lately** AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, writers block, i cant think straight!!!!

People always claim to be ready for the unexpected. Are they sure? Death, sickness, new borns, and plenty others are always things unexpected and no one is ever ready for ...