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Oh no, now the Poe in me is coming out. #7: The bus whined and stopped at the curb A sneeze of air opened the doors. My eyes were pulled ...

April 14th: Really swell. I love how each stanza had a line that seemed to tug her backwards. We're really in her mind and in her actions throughout. April 13th: ...

Nice bite-sizing! I'm not really sure from what position the narrator is watching, though (as in, spectator, competitor, pupil?). I like the arabesque, unraveling stars mucho. Pen-Drive a longer eyebr

Demeter! No problemo on the commenting. I can assure you that it's my pleasure to read yer stuff! Navita! I called it: you are way too kind. Yeppers, the rhyme ...

I've gotta admit, this is kinda weird. I'm glad we're all open with each other? That said, Demeter, those pictures are awesome. It's pretty telling about you that dress-up includes ...

Almost lunch. I'm just gonna have fun today. #5: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, Said Frost, admittedly, optimistically But from what I have understood This metaphor is far ...

Has anyone ever told you, Navita, that you are a fantastic critic as well as too nice? Cos it's the truth. Now pardon me while I churn something out for ...

4.12 Heck yeah! So many stupendous lines and images. Nerves being paltry decoration. Cells not seeing daylight since gym class. Can they imagine that--wait they can't. lobotomy - but it's ...

April 12th: woolen stockings have never been enough to gag the staircase in the dark Love it! Agreed with Jasmine: I don't really know how to read the first few ...

Science is a freaking circus! As a geek with (hopefully) a sense of humor, I immediately appreciate this poem. where the hell is that anorexic vein-whorl I’m supposed to be ...

Thanks! Yeah, it really is different, and I would love to go back and make the two a believable whole someday (a slow transition to frantic phrases). But I had ...

Latest one: ...conversations surf the soundless waves Great play on words. ...adept at being alone. Powerful and pointed. My only criticism is I wonder if you even need the first ...

April 6: but dead like the autumn leaves. Really fitting comparison. I like it. by the disgusting fingers of Life. I think you can come up with an adjective much ...

I am incapable of commenting on many poems at once, so I'll start with #10 and see what happens. (Plus, I'm at work. Boring Monday, but gotta keep up images). ...

#3: There is the question if I exist. A hush o'er the crowd; a window-scratching branch Are more powerful than my trembling fist. I am no Hamlet; I hold no ...