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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.

    As Nice as Pie is quite daring. I enjoy it mucho. Also, the focus on feet is very...cinematic. It has the flavor of a touching short film.

    Apr 9, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    No, thank you , Hannah! The following is a poeticized version of a excerpt from a short story that's been bumping around on my computer for the last few months. ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    Navita: The expectations are overwhelming. Just for that, I'll play around and take it down a notch ;) ***

    Apr 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.

    I apologize, I can often come across as harsh-sounding, but really I'm just being blunt. Do allow me one more blunt comment because [blunt] just because a story is true ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    Hannah: Thanks! Such words give me the warm fuzzies, truly. I went looking for this just to berate you for not posting but it would seem the error was mine, ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Angela's Poetry Place

    You miss e d on e . Mal e vol e ntly b e fitt e d Ey e s.

    Apr 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.

    Come on, man, this is what spellchecker and proofreading is for. Even when you paste your work into the Post a Topic text box for the website, it will squiggly-red-underline ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.

    Has anyone ever told you--seriously, unabashed, with all honesty-- you are prolific. I cannot even read these faster than you write them. this is how i remember her is my ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    Intertextual: There's something so intimate about reading a Word Document as opposed to the forum posts. Y'know, it also helps that intertextual is simply a great piece.

    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

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    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: drunk with the great starry void -- jack's napowrimo thread

    #5 historical revisionism: ha HA !

    Apr 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Aborted Child

    Shall I be the devil's advocate? Shall I be the crabby old guy? I guess I will. On the plus side, there's little to nothing wrong with your spelling, grammar, ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    Hannah: You are very correct. Immediately following the quoted line, I ceased to enjoy writing it, and it shows. Thanks for the kind words! ***

    Apr 5, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

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    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    Navs: You don't miss a beat ;) It's good to be back here. Jigs: Thanks, hombre (with an unsilent H) ***

    Apr 2, 2011


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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