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Indeed, the destruction of the rules here is appropriate. Rules aren't necessarily made to be broken--rules allow us all to communicate in the same language and understand each other. But ...

Not that I've said anything before but... Where are you and why are you on the third page? You are now on the first page, Missy. EDIT: Oh no, I ...

On Watchmen though, don't bother watching the movie. It fails. Ha! Figured. Just curious, though, because there was so much cinematographic potential outside of Michael Bay action cuts and John ...

Jack (may I call you Jack? Everyone else seems to): I hadn't thought of that, but now that I have I'm afraid of being derivative! That part was freaking great, ...

Interesting start. The suspense is definitely there, but you give it away a little too much during the attacks. I'll get to that later. Demon in the closet. For example, ...

This is a pretty good story. I was skeptical about the slow start, but it picked up in tenderness in the middle...but lost a little of the momentum toward the ...

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I won't be doing it the next year as I'll be preparing for GRE Y'know, what better way to prepare for the verbal section than flexing your poetry muscle? Pull ...

The honest opinion of a stranger is that 1) When you're not alluding to mythology or Shakespeare or similar items, I have no idea what you're talking about 2) I ...

I once thought that suffering through it would make me a better person, like baptism by fire. I was wrong.

Don't do it. It's a trap.

All riiiight, you've fixed the tense switching thing! I am SO PROUD. Also, your wording is usually pretty appropriate and the characters and motivation are fleshed out. We have two ...

Good ol' collective unconscious! Jun is great. How do you find these things? I just find myself scrounging through poetry sections in used bookstores and tossing aside all the unwanted ...

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*like* There are probably at least 150 fellow students that will never know I captured their likenesses on paper. I wonder if I've ever been a victim.