sarahk1771

Broken glass is always an uncomfortable sight. It’s more scary when the broken glass is from the windows of a car. Broken glass is horrifying when it’s covered in blood ...

I never knew my parents. But I reckon they were real idiots! They got rid of me at the first chance they could. I was only a few years old ...

I never knew my parents. But I reckon they were real idiots! They got rid of me at the first chance they could. I was only a few years old ...

My parent's hadn't returned home when I got home. Huh this makes no sense do you mean ' My parents weren't home when i walked in?' I hurriedly . Is ...

“Go.” Kara said, “just go talk to him.” I turned to stare at her. whats going on is this a flash back? “I can’t do that.” I said, “look, he’s ...

Chapter 2 Switching dorms As I lay in bed, I could here the rain beat of the window, it was calming, since Ella came everything felt wrong, as if I ...

I really liked this, i read the first line and wanted to read so much more, seriously good and keep it up

It's good and has a good story line to it, although i wouldn't have written in like that. :? At the start i thougth you wrote it a bit childishly ...

I like the use of language here, although you could change some words around :) It was really good, i read it to my little brother. I love the way ...

I'm sorry but I didn't understand what was going on, maybe you should proof read and change somethings. Maybe if you can explain it more :)

you blew me away, I haven't heard a poem like that since i was younger, i love I'm a plexiglass window to another side of the world beutiful. If i ...

okay here it goes.... :) it's seriously good, although you should re read it, i was a tiny bit confused on what was going on, any who, you could have ...

I'm really getting in to this, truely amazing. You have just a couple of mistakes. Try and make this longer, did she do the test? Was it hard, or was ...

Contrast light when darkness falls. The sun rest upon the sea, Hills alive upon lights true desire, Darken rays falls upon the sun creating an eclipse. The stars twinkle but ...

That was really emotinal. I loved this though you should describe luke. Is he tall? and when he says (“I..” He began,avoiding my eyes, “I mean, this can't..I don't feel ...