sarahjane97

Whoa. That was really, really, good!!! I was getting some serious chills up my spine... I also liked how you introduced "Beatrice" (Shana) in the prologue and brought the reader ...

Wow, this was such a creative perspective! I liked the casuality of depression, because it made it seem more like a real person than an emotion. The poem flowed really ...

I consume the compliments, savoring their warmth, wallowing in their meaning. I allow a rare grin to transform my lips from a tight line of war to an open crescent. ...

WOW. This was a cute and humerous way to potray heartbreak. Usually, poems on this topic are very dark and heavy...this was exactly the opposite and gave me a fresh ...

I wasn't sure if you'd be able to say what you wanted to say with such a restricted amount of syllables, but you did it! Good job!

I really like this poem! It is deep and touching and relatable. Also, I love your title as that's what caused me to read the poem in the first place. ...

This poem took me by surprise. When I read the title, I thought it was going to be some happy little poem about holiday cheer or something. But it wasn't ...

First off, your title is great. That's what drew me into this poem. Also, the idea was very interesting and even though it was about dying, you wrote it in ...

Wow. That was really good. The rhyming didn't feel strained, and parts of it were very true! My favorite sentence was the last one, "Please enjoy your stay". I love ...

I really like this (I'm a sucker for rhyming poems!) I liked that the emotion was still strongly present and none of it was lost in the effort to rhyme! ...

Thanks so much for the advice, you guys!!! As you can see, I've edited the poem a bit, but with rhyming poems it's always hard to get the rhythm right! ...

Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to the public, you’re impulsive and obscene. Forgive this stereotype of your age group as a whole, but you're ...

I really liked this poem. The repitition was effective and I couldn't help but smile as I was reading it. I've been reading quite a lot of depressing poems lately, ...

OK, this is going to sound really really dumb, but what does PM mean? People have asked me to PM them and I have no idea what to do!

Back in Pre-K, you whispered through grimy hands, “I stole the last cookie.” You grinned in triumph, until fear got the better of you. Then your forehead crinkled comically and ...