sarahjane97

The content of this poem was great, and there were no puncuation errors as far as I could see. However, I agree with Noelle, the breaks in the middle of ...

The effort you put into this poem totally paid off! It was beautiful, and the rhyming enhanced the poem instead of dragging it down. I envy your rhyming skills! :) ...

Your poem was very well written. Before writing this review, I actually paused to think about those who died fighting for our country. This proves that your poem has an ...

This poem shows what poetry is all about...turning something sad into something beautiful. Nice work. :) The only nitpick I have is this: On the front is her birthday Is ...

I must say I prefered the first version of your poem. I think the rhyming the second version diluted the tone and made it harder to understand. In general, the ...

Hi, I'm Sarah and I'll be reviewing your work today! I liked the general idea of this chapter a lot. However, it seemed a little rushed to me. If you ...

Wow, you're drawings are so...creepy. In a good way though, don't worry! :) I LOVE the detail in your work, and I honestly have no critic for this (sorry!). Everything ...

Nice! This poem had great rhyme and imagery, and displayed immense imagination! I have no critic for this. This poem's pace was just like a thrill ride, and made me ...

Chapter Two: Break Some Rules After seventh period, I stopped by my locker, grabbed my backpack, and ran to find my bus. It wasn’t that I was excited to play ...

I’m that kid in your class that you know, but not really. You know my name, you know my reputation, but do you know me? Do you know that I ...

I'm new to the Photography forum on this site and I have a question. Are you not allowed to post photos of people here? The reason I'm asking is because ...

Hi Michael! Again, nice job! I really liked the emotion in this chapter, it drew me in. The dream was fantastic, I could imagine it all in my head like ...

Hey Michael! Another amazing chapter! The only real problem I had with this was the change in narration. You might want to add something at the begining of the chapter ...

I am completely in love with your squirrel photo! The lines add a strong geometric aspect to it, and you somehow managed to get a RUNNING squirrel in focus! I ...

Wow, this poem gave me chills! The tone was very dark and despairing, and you're rich choice of words emphasized this. I liked the ending as well; it was like ...