sarahjane97

Wow, Michael. That was just...beautiful. Raw and emotional and a bit disjointed but beautiful. This had a fresh perspective, an unexpected (if sad) twist ending, and honest emotional weight. Keep ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. When I first read the title, I was expecting a morally wrong narrator that was...well...a liar. But when I read the poem and realize ...

Hi! Okay, first of all, can you please resize these pictures? From what I can see they look great, but it's hard to critique something when you can only see ...

Hello there! I thought that these pictures were really amazing! The photos of your friend were especially stunning as they seemed to convey a wistful mood. I also liked the ...

Thanks for reviewing everyone! Also, I don't know why you can't see the photos, WriteWriter. They're showing up just fine on my computer. Sorry! :(

Here are some more photos I took over the summer. Enjoy, and any critique is appreciated! :)

Hello! I'm Sarah and I'll be reviewing your work today! :) First of all, I read the first chapter and you've got a very interesting concept here. It's a bit ...

Hi! As the title says, this is my first photography post here at YWS! I know there are a lot of photos, but I wanted to keep them together because ...

Wow! This is just adorable! :) The only nit-pick I have is her lack of eyebrows. Eyebrows add so much expression...why leave them out? Also they make the person look ...

Wow. I am dumbstruck. That was so tragic and beautiful. This nearly made me cry... I loved how you used the perspective of a young child here. The simple, innocent, ...

I understood this poem up until the last stanza. Is the narrator of this poem a guy, and that's why he can't date his straight best friend? If that's correct, ...

Wow, I am literally in love with this. I'm a Harry Potter fanatic, but I don't take it too seriously. It was hilarious to see Harry acting...well...not like Harry. As ...

This was really good! The only nitpick I had was this: Your eye s travel along the keyboard, eye ing up the letters, as if expecting a word to hit ...

Hey Michael, it's me again. :) I just realized something. This story is set in September, 2001, right? If so, you may want to change this: A vacation… in 2003!! ...

Hello Michael! Another awesome chapter! :) This was very well-written, and I'm excited to see where the story will go from here. Here are just some nit-picks I had while ...