sarahjane97

I don't wake up on a Sunday at 7:00 AM for many things... ...but I will for a poetry workshop! Can you sign me up for the Venus mission? I'm ...

I first got into writing in fourth grade, thanks to the crazy encouragement of my English teacher. Now when I look back on those writings, I have no idea what ...

Here's my first art submission on YWS! I'm so excited! :D Feel free to comment/criticize/tear it apart my fellow YWSers!

Ooh ooh! This is so pretty! o.o Y'know what's funny is, I just dropped by this forum to submit my first drawing, and it looks a bit like yours! Same ...

Why do I wear the color black? It doesn't really matter. Why don't we change the subject and engage in mindless chatter? Why do I wear the color black? Well, ...

Hi Michael! This is so simple, so beautiful, and so open ended. I love how anyone could read this and interpret it in their own way-- it makes it easier ...

Hello! Sarah here to review! :) I liked this poem. It was pretty short, but carried enough emotion in it to fill up a whole page. I also congradulate you ...

We were worthless, we were costly, we were forgers of broken paths. Black with sin, our guns were empty as we charged the Sheriff’s wrath. “Don’t look down!” you yelled ...

Hi again, Michael! As the fifth reviewer, everything that could be improved on has already been pointed out (show not tell, yadayadayada) Haha, I have trouble with showing not telling ...

Hi Michael! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing your new(ish) stuff. Stupid finals. -_-' Anyhow, here's what I think of the poem: I like this ...

Hi Michael! I hope you're ready for a boatload of compliments, 'cause here they come... I really like the pace of the book so far. Since I'm writing a novel ...

The other day my little sister and I were watching Project Runway on TV, and afterward she wanted to dress up and do a "fashion photoshoot". I've never taken portraits ...

Hi Michael! I usually have something to critique in every story, but for once I've got nothing. This was just amazing, and all I can say is write more! The ...

Hey Michael! Again, your poetry continues to astound me. I like how this poem teeters on the edge of confusion and really makes you stop and think. Good job! Also, ...

I've had an intense case of writer's block for the past two months, so this may be a little rough. Feel free to tear it apart now, haha. :D The ...