sarahcrosbeh

Haha, in product design you were like...oh my gosh this is good, but i can't take it home to scan and put on that website becaue miss will make me ...

It amazes me how some people can just draw..and some people cannot And then there's you who just rips other peoples drawings to pieces with your high tech cartoonery. XD ...

"Wow! That's fancy! It's a little hard to see the outlines of your flowers. If you went over them in black pen, it would be easier to see and look ...

"I actually really dislike this and I think I'm gonna just delete it and start over. I guess I was trying too hard; even I admit that. Gosh." Good lord, ...

This is quite amazing, i like it alot. Your descriptions are very well done andd also very unique. :) One thing i'd sugest is capital letters and such, just to ...

I really like the idea behind this, it's great. I'd love to here it with music. I'd try and work it out myself but i'm no good with chords and ...

Hehe, i like this, it's nicely done. The rhyming is all good, maybe add some punctuation - capital letters. But i suppose this doesn't matter much seen as it'll be ...

Wow, this is pretty good. I like it. The whole story/idea/concept is nice. "I walked outside to the dark sky above I saw firelights but, they were bombs dropping down. ...

Wow, i quite like this. :) It's super. I especially like these two little bits; "The dreary rain just pounding. Can't you see the difference between us. This could never ...

Oh my, well i liked this, but i am not too good at reading old language. (If that's what you'd call it, i'm sure you know what i mean haha). ...

Ooh, this is good i like it. I'm not going to like comment on anything too technical as i'd probably be wrong about it. Sorry i'm not much help. XD ...

"You did a fabulous job on the tattoo, shading, and coloring. His face seems a little too square and his hair seems like it should be darker. The eyes are ...

"His voice is sweet like honey, Smooth and delicious, Filling me with sickly pleasures. Arms surround me protectively, The beat of his heart; Creating the tempo for my fortress." Oof, ...

Great photographs! I really love the very first one as the colours are bright and amazing. Good job. :D x

I very much like the idea of this, it's super. Maybe try improving on your punctuation and structure abit. But all in all this is great. Good work. :D x