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Brumby Engineering College Woo ^-^ :smt081

Lizzy, i have been with you when you have recieved such comments, and they are all the same aren't they. I think this is a very British piece of writing ...

Aww another cute one.. I see you are being influenced by childhood games with this and the last poem :) Super

This is cute lyok ^-^ I likes it alot

Short and Sweet :)

:D Fantastic idea and well wrote xx

i love this story i hope youve put this half on bebo you should put the first half on here lizzypoo i can see a good storyline developing and such ...

Like a worm worm in two halves. mrs standerline always told us to write something..then watch tv or whatever.then go back to it and read again..then any mistakes will stand ...

I really like this story :) It's quite amusing hehe. There's one thing i'd say though, All he, Trevor, does is swim in circles and wait for the next time ...

After a few reads i think i have understood this, it gives off a very eery feeling, which is effective I likes it :)

I'm not really sure who is who in this, i was a little confused. But i like it :) Gosh, my reveiw isn't very technical x]