sarahcrosbeh

Oooh nice story seems to be developing here, interesting :) I should like to see how this develops... I blinked myself back to reality and scanned the flawless and only ...

I like this poem alot :) One thing i'd sugest is to put capital letters in there, but people have already said that, anyways... My favorite bit is this, as ...

:smt112 :smt079 :smt055 :smt044 AHAHAHAAA That was so funny to read as it brought back all the memories from our note passing lessons. And yes our bond formed in a ...

Oh dear, i've just realised how many times i used the word started in that second/third paragraph.

How do i delete ?

This is a little too GARGH SERIOUS for me. Still it was good, but i didn't really get it. I like this bit, Compliments and love, Sprawled out in italics, ...

I very much like the idea of this :) As i like it when you mention your son at the end (That sounds as if you have a son; i ...

That is a good idea Lizzy I may well touch it up alittle (oh my gosh that sounded wrong) I meant i may well imrpove it alittle XD Then put ...

That's right Lizzy I am a cheeky poof and you know it. [wiggles eyebrows] A horses tale? I've never been so outraged [sings forever young]

Hello, my name is Sarah. I’m 15 years of age and I live in a little town called Scunthorpe, which is in England. I go to a school named Brumby ...

I like the italics... I also liek the bit about peeling off the new paint to get to the old paint K, my reveiw was simple :)

xD I feel your pain, i have the same

Ooh i like the way this story is going Lizzy :] Keep writing (Y)

I agree :)

Aww i like this alot, it's so cute. ^^ And i was interested all the way through. Write more! We stopped, dead. Deader than the cow whose heart was in ...