sarahcrosbeh

This is great. :) Your descriptions and imagery are very good. I can't really find anything i disliked about this. Maybe though, as a suggestion, i'd add some punctuation to ...

I really like this poem, it's great. I continue on my journey to nowhere, enjoying nature, Bird calls surround me, the quiet splash of the water below, The many throngs ...

This is very good :) With the puncuation and stuff, well, the people above have already mentioned it ;) All in all i am very much enjoying this story.

I really hope this film is a 15 and not an 18..because if it is i can't watch it on the big screen :(

I agree with Lizzy, i also read this in my head as if it was a rap :lol: I like this, its great and original :)

Aww, this is really cute :) I can't see anything i don't like in here...i love it :)

Poo to you Sarah, you are the liar in this clan. ^^ It was not me, it was Gary Oldman

Carrot Cakes are poo Johnny Depp is...[wiggles eyebrows]...on my calender

Emma Mary Revel You are anything but shy You are nice, but i hate you in maths But i think we have a bit of an agreement that we fall ...

Thanks for that it's a good tip. When you read it normally, you tend to miss really obvious mistakes. My english teacher told me to write, then go watch tv ...

This is very simple, but i like the simplicity of it. I couldn't really find a meaning or story in here, but i think it's a good idea/start. :) x

This is a lovely picture. I like the way you've done it :) lol The head is very well drawn and the legs look really fragile.

[sits and stares at the glowyness] :)

I don't think the terrorists would have sat down and worked out all that maths before they attacked. And i agree about the chain letter bit. They are never true, ...

I don't really get what this is about. I like it, in a strange way. But I can't be sure of what you are trying to say in this poem.