sapphirewednesday

I think it was too long and got a bit boring after a while. I know I'm not really part of your "audience" because I'm not all Christian, but I ...

This poem is really funny and extremely catchy!! The rhythm is great and I can hear the voice in my head. Really great job! :) No criticism here! :)

I like the idea behind it, but the poem is lacking stanzas, and flow. I like the last two lines the best, very good metaphor. :) Keep writing, write from ...

Sad, but really really well written! Your poem is just my type!! Like Like Like Like Love!! :) Thank you for sharing this.

It was a sunset, just a sunset As it descended into the night. The red and purple and yellow and gold Scattered, in a shimmering light I can't explain the ...

Haha! This is great! I really loved reading the clever rhyming, really brought a smile to my face! Great work! Thanks so much for sharing, I'll have to read this ...

Also, HIGHWHITESOCKS, the poem was referring to a storyline from a really old book.... it ended sadly. Originally the poem was simply about two girls being in love, but as ...

Butterfinger, I'm sorry. That was really immature. I just was a bit shocked because I worked really hard and I got a rude response. If you had given me pointers ...

well, it wasnt made for immature people :)

WOW. Amazing. That's really all I can say. You are TRULY talented. Keep up your writing, I'm following you. Awesome.

It started with my hair, and progressed to a kiss It started with me loving her and ended up like this The way her beautiful body gleamed, In the pure ...

Thanks, I had that first thought myself, so I'll change it now!

Yeah, I wrote this about a week ago, and I wasn't really in a mood for grammar. Haha, if you've ever read any of my other work you'll see its ...

There once was a young girl, smart and slick Her favorite things to use were her pen and her pick She played her guitar whenever she could, But did most ...

His cold touch and cold mood and cold hand grabs mine, His razor blade had a tip so fine He held my arm up, and prepared it with a kiss ...