sandayselkie

I liked it. You had mr caught right at the start. It was interesting and fast moving. Kept you reading to know if he managed to escape. I agree though, ...

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I wrote this story for a local competition at school. It got me first prize and I have entered it into the Brit Writers Awards. I hop you like it ...

Great begining. Love the story line. The whole thing of being dead yet not suppose to be. I got a bit lost with the whole golden book and code of ...

Wow. An interesting story. It is a fantastic plotline already developing. Leaves you interested in what will happen next. How will the mother react? Will the sweepers come to see ...

Oh yeah, that was a brilliant ending. I love this whole story. Your description was great and I never thought Jeremy would be the murderer. I hoped Windsor would return ...

Really good. Started with a bang, ended on a bang. It leaves you wondering what happened. Did she just lose her memory or what? Do her adoptive parents actually know? ...

I really like this. I was confused at one point at the beginning with Zayn. Was all those events in order or did you go backwards and forwards in time. ...

I really like this story. You have a great easy going mood to it. I think the best bit is Jots almost sarcastic annoying manner. Keeps the story light hearted ...

Nice. You really piqued peoples interest with the noticing of the egg. As stated before, it leaves a lot of questions. What is an epsilon? Who is the man? What ...

Thank you for your comments because it really helps me improve my writing. I do kind of explain the fact Phoenix is important later. He is one of the main ...

Positively Brilliant. Will there be a continuation? I so wish Dandy could have gone with Anthony. Will he come back for her? Great description, great plot line and great hint ...

What happened to chapters 6 and 7. The fact they were missing threw me entirely but you soon had me back on track. I am loving it. The way yo ...

loving it

I had my suspicions that the deputy was the wolf, but the way you described it still had me surprised. You described her reactions really well in my idea. The ...