sandayselkie

I'm interested in trying out with a partner. Never really done this before. Prefer fantasy though willing to try out something like crime or comedy.

I am interested in a partner. I mostly write fantasy and done a little fanfiction in Stargate, but willing to try new genres

Hi. Uh, yeah. Please please forgive me. As I said before, I messaged someone and they have just responded with a positive so can you take me of the list ...

I like it. Other then what Midnight and Pencilgirl say, I see nothing else wrong. Mind you, I am not one to take advice from. Love the way you started ...

Interesting. Strange. I love how you entered into the story. I was a little lost as to why they were bidding really. Love the story though.

Oh cool. I have read this through all the way and love it. At times it seemed a bit rushed and confusing but great. Can't wait to see more. I ...

I really like this. Starts of quick and you don't dawdle on details. Can't wait to see more and hope the publishers like it.

So what happened between him scrabbling to the surface and now? What happened to the girl or will you come back to that? All in all, a brilliant piece. You ...

Interesting and capturing. You don't delve much into the actual plot line but the background of the character. Starting of knowing how Aliza sees things. I like it

creepy. This is really good. It leaves you with an idea of what might be happening but does nothing to clarify.

Oh a really good story. The whole secrecy thing shows that they still don't know each other well enough yet. The fact there is a spy makes it even more ...

Wow. You are really getting depp and dark. I have to admit I am getting confused with all the names and you seem a bit fast at times.A good storyline ...

Aw he really cares for her. I have one comment. Sometimes it gets confusing when she has a vision or a memory. Maybe you would be better putting that in ...

I love it also. It took me a little bit to realise that the girls were all converging in one place.

I really like this story. I love the whole way Nastusia has ended up a part of something really much bigger then thought of before. You manage to keep the ...