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First of all, I found most of this poem boring. The only bit that really caught my attention was: My name is written in blood No one else's is, just ...

A perfect example of what a poem should look and sound like! Perfect use of words, perfect describing. I especially like the last part: Though perfect to look at Th ...

Fantastic! Very engaging for your readers and easy to follow. There was only one mistake I could make out: 1. “Before you get comfy is this house, I must introduce ...

Prologue It was dark times in the faraway lands of Zurrak. The sun grew weaker day by day and many stars from the night sky blinked out for the last ...

I feel as if I can relate to this poem. It shows a persons deepest feelings and it captures many hearts. Even now, as I sit here, tears threaten to ...

At the start of your poem I was thinking "This is just going to be one of those predicatable and obvious poems" but by the end I had changed my ...

I have never come across a vampire poem before, but yours was fantastic! The only problem I find is that I know many people hate vampires, so they will dislike ...

Don't write the obvious storyline! Keep your readers waiting and wondering! Don't write a predictable ending, it will only anger and dissapoint your readers!

There are some writers who are born to capture hearts with their writing, and you are one of them. One day you will be a great author or poet, whichever ...

What does he see me as? Am I the enemy who rides upon his back? Have I stolen his freedom and pride? What if I am the slave master, to ...

I liked it, considering it was only hastily written. When writing poetry I always thinks it looks nicer and flows nicer when each section has the same amount of lines. ...

I actually really like this! I feel as if it's so true! I don't know if it is actually about writing and finding the inspiration to do it, but that's ...

I am the bearer of darkness, Thunder is a part of me, Lightening is my sister, I am possessed by misery. Children scream before me, Men bathe in their tears, ...

What a great poem! There are poems and stories that will stick with me to the end, and this is one of them! I saw a few mistakes as well, ...