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Re: What They Wanted.
hahahah oh god. i wrote this on impulse at 2 in the morning last night.. thank you for being so open minded, Im going to see what I can do ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: What They Wanted.
haha this probably doesn't make any sense. i know it needs aalotttta work. just give me any advice.. i need it. ------old poem--------------- The ground is clustered by stereotypes. Like ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: What I Never Said
I love that you are changing up your usual style! It is always good to do to keep your writing freshly inspired. I have fallin in love with th first ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Mosquito
Different points of view always interest me, and this is definitley a new one! I love how you give the mosquitoe a personality all its own, it really adds life ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Fake beauty
wow.. Its funny how so little words can mean so much when you put them together haha. i honestly know what its like to be the girl in this poem. ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Breathing Insanity
This is my first review haha. but first of all, I really loved this poem. Reading what you wrote, I could relate to the emotions and feelings you were trying ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: fear.
this was about a confusing, messy breakup and about the fear that came with having to move on. i no its a little abstract, but that's pretty much the idea ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: drainingyou.
Im laying in this lukewarm bathwater. A passionate love gone cold. Im watching the faucet drip, drip, drip. When did this relationship grow old? Im counting all of the bathroom ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Him.
Im having troubles on how to end it? i always get stuck.. ------------------------------------------------------------------ If you looked into my eyes, you wouldn't see all the dead butterflies. If y
Sep 6, 2009
