sameeha

Well, don't you seem sleep obsessed:) That was quite simple and childish. Try to not repeat things so much in your future work. Slways think about the reader and remember ...

Wow, that was long!!! why did you rate it 18+ now? I thought your idea was thoughtful and certainly very creative.Love the idea, very special and unique. Good luck with ...

Dude, did you just change the name of this poem twice in 4 minutes? wow, your dealing with confusion. I thought your idea was thoughtful and certainly very creative.Love the ...

Love the idea, very special and unique. Good luck with your future work and always remember to keep things straight and simple. Keep an eye on your grammar and sentence ...

Love the idea, very special and unique. Good luck with your future work and always remember to keep things straight and simple. Keep an eye on your grammar and sentence ...

I think you may have a few grammatical errors. Your daddy shud bvery proud. Good luck with your future work and always remember to keep things straight and simple. Keep ...

Clear, to the point and probably what most people seem to be looking for in my work, effective. Your poem seems to have more questions than answers though but I ...

Well dude, you may not be that happy to find a newby reviewing but thats like all you just got now. Anyways, great and new plot, keep on with the ...

A rock to fill the vacancy is a shape shifter becoz the rock will be a different shape at different times, depending on climate and tide. In darkness, it glows ...

So I was reading midnight sun on and now im reading this , apparently the world is very much into vampires, w2erewolves and these fantasy creatures. The writing style was ...

That was certainly good work. And that a 16 year old has written that, I find it surprising. Maybe you should publish your poetry some time soon. That might actually ...