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Breathe for love tomorrow, ‘cause maybe there’s another way. Breathe (Until Tomorrow) - Paramore The sun painted Leah’s eyelids pink as she lay on the cool grass. She watched as ...

Thanks guys! :) I have it in stanzas on my computer, but for some reason YWS didn't want to break it up... :\ Anyways, thanks again! :D

Note: This poem style is called a glosa. It's where you take four previously published lines from music, literature, or prose and write four stanzas that close with the lines. ...

Hi there! My name's Sam, and I'll be reviewing today. This poem was very well written. It was very hard for me to find nit-picks. The poem was almost simply ...

Hi there! My name's Sam and I'm your reviewer for today! Death has become a common thing on the streets today People broadcasting it, like it was their name I ...

My bangs fall into my eyes as my mother's wail rises another octave. I close my eyes and bite back the tears, feeling the warmth of blood ooze onto my ...

Whoa! I agree with June. You have a creative eye. I like the monotone scheme you have; it just sets the atmosphere perfectly. I do agree, however, that the background ...

Hi there! So I had this review all typed out, but when I hit submit, my internet decided to commit suicide and I lost it all. *huff* I agree with ...

Hi there! I like this poem! It effectively depicts the emotions running through your mind when you're sitting through a class you absolutely can't stand. You followed your theme very ...

Hi there! This is my first review, so bare with me :oops: I noticed a few spelling mistakes: She had so desired those things her sister owned, nd... Olivia had ...

Wow! I feel so welcome already :D Favorite color? Favorite author? Favorite book? Favorite poet? Favorite genre to read? Favorite genre to write? Tired of answering questions yet? And do ...

Hi there! :D I'm fourteen years old and in the ninth grade. I have been writing for seven years, but only started taking it seriously last year. I love photography, ...