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Why would rambo carry an AK? Rambo had an M60. True. But I don't think MISTAR WAFFLES is that much of an EXAMPLE OF MANLIENESS to handle an M60

As all the other members of the team kept coming in and getting acquainted with their quarters, another chopper was disembarking on the pad. Kobi Shimoni disembarked from the chopper, ...

OOC: Yeah, I know about the Tavor. I'm not a fan of bull-pups though.

pandoraswritings-- This may be fine for an assignment. It is usually advisable, however, to refrain from being preachy in poetry you wish others to read and seriously respond to. In ...

Needs more muscular/military stuff. Too pope, not enough rambo. Make the scepter an ak47. THATd be cool.

To torment you until eternity.

NAME: SSGT Kobi Shimoni AGE: 26 HEIGHT/WEIGHT: 6' even/210 lbs HAIR/EYES: black/brown PRIMARY MILITARY SPECIALTY: weapons SECONDARY MILITARY SPECIALTY: hand to hand combat PRIMARY WEAPON: Galil AR SEC

I'm sorry, but due to the poor grammar and spelling, I couldn't even understand what you are trying to say, so Its hard to critique it on a more artistic ...

Random ending...which I liked! It sounded like a story more than a poem. I would suggest changing this to fiction or something. Its a balllad, Wiggy. Its supposed to be ...

As far as Haikus go, its okay, syllable wise. But, in doing so, you've compromised all vividness, detail, meaning, etc. (GRR! THATS WHY I HATE HAIKUS!!! GRRR!!!) AHEM. Anyways, its ...

Falling in Love with Parades, Military Marches and the Girl in number 23 King George Street By: Dan Sanders *This is a composite poem* Do you remember that day in ...

BETTER! STRONGER! FASTER! ALEI KRAV! The training will make the Empire's soldiers will be the single greatest fighting force on the face of the earth.

I like the way you think, Your Lordship. My men are deploying as we speak. Operation: Dice Roll is now underway.

DQ

Its true, you know. Hair is the source of all our power. Why do you think Ortho's wear beards and payot (hair curlies)