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*Yawns* oh, yeah, wait, okay, so your poem, it was confusing. I sense no whatever the other person said. Plus I'm tired and an suffering through English class right now, ...

Sleep. What would you do if the government all of a sudden became very militant-facist (think Stalin, Hitler, Mussolini) and came and dragged your parents off in the middle of ...

I'm not saying perfect diction means "perfect eloquence" and whatnot, but it does need to be perfect in the sense that it conveys its message, and meaning, as well as ...

Holy crap, I've actually been writing lately! So here goes one of the poems I wrote. A Still Life In Color If you walk slowly enough at the right time ...

This is really good, I just have a few small issues. One, is repetition. I understand that you are doing it for a specific purpose, but for some reason, it ...

Honestly, I'm not a fan of the whole "conversation" style. I don't like it when people write poetry as they talk, and its because while they may be entertaining (yours ...

*Ahem* First things first: END RHYME IS THE GREAT SATAN. NEVER, EVER, EVER, USE IT. (Unless, you are a VERY skilled poet and are using it for a specific reason, ...

Grif and Incan win.

I have a good freind who is a very devout (sunni, I think?) Muslim. Any questions you have I can relay to him, if you would like.

Salaam wa alaikum, Amal. Hello, I'm Dan from Israel. Most people here just call me "sab" though. I know some arabic, and I'd love to learn more! You can teach ...

Holy crap, Bob, thats amazing. But still not enough to remotely damage Chuck Norris, and to say otherwise is Blasphemy.

I really like the idea of a thriller. You could do a kind of political suspense/drama thriller thingy...think like Bourne Identity meets Munich meets The Sum of All Fears...BOOYAH.

I guess I'll add some recent pics of me. And for those of you who know me, and haven't seen me for a while, Yes, this DOES mean I'm back. ...

"Hi. I'm Livi" a short girl with crazy dark brown hair said to Kobi as he went out to throw out the remains of him MRE the guard had given ...

I'll give it a shot. I'll get you a profile soon.