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I liked it. But I knew from the very begginning that there was going to be some kind of twist. Heh. Anyway, the only critique I can think of is ...

Done.

I agree with ya on that one... Sheesh, have I suffered the wrath of a woman who I've given the truth to one too many times, to risk it again.....*shudders*

Well, its meant to be more of a reflective thing, not a narrative of that aspect of his life. Besides, in the camps, you can't get revenge against teh nazis. ...

"Is that all you know? Or is there more?" Vico asked, carefully. "This will greatly help the council in our task..." he was interrupted by a buzzing at the door. ...

"Evgrisa, this is very good that you can remeber this...but its also very important that you tell me whatever else he was up to...what he did, to whom, with whom, ...

This is my latest work, and it could use some crits. Thanks. Don't forget Under the Desert Sky, though!!! Please and thank you.

Idea: to write a short story/prolouge to my existing story about a jewish settler in Israel in the 1940s before the state was formed, and his role fighting in the ...

"So he sent you into the temple," he said, thoughtfully. "To get information. That would make sense....he couldn't dare be found out, but he does know the proper customs," Master ...

"Yes, actually, it does," Master Starweaver said. "He is a Jedi with whom I have freindly relations. He will be meeting us at the Jedi Temple, for the council meeting." ...

That sounds like a good plan,Qi. I must try that.....

I was accepted to Bradley, which is a really good private Liberal Arts school, renowned for journalism, which is my major. But it costed too much, and the scholarship I ...

Heh... I'm not going to comment, as it wouldn't be like me. All i'm going to say is... I wish I either didn't look like I was 11, or that ...

"Of course, Evgrisa. In fact, I think I shall join you, for we do have a busy day today. The pilot tells me we should reach Couruscant by early to ...

Captain Jack McMannus heard this captain boasting about how HE had destroyed both ships, all by himself--just his ship and crew. He had originally just come for the booze, and ...