ryanbonner12

Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate the honest criticism!

“Here, take a bag,” my dad said to me, “put anything in here you think can be donated.” I visited Aunt Jacquiee’s vacant house with my parents to hollow it ...

Definitely a dark piece! I really enjoyed it. The tone came through wonderfully and your diction was for the most part spot on. But as it stands right now it ...