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Re: A World Apart
Oh wow, this is great. :] If I'm not mistaken this is rather...philosophical, no? I love philosophy. Wondering, why are we here? How did we get here? How long do ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Where it Hurts
Ooh I really like this! There were a few little things I saw though... And, since the last time I checked, Natalie Goodman... Mmmm I sometimes find myself starting sentences ...
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Re: Disney's Sleeping Beauty
This painted a great picture for me. I could really picture it all. I particularly liked the part where the dragon ripped his body to pieces. Deffinately a twist to ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Fiction
This is amazing for something you say you did quickly. Perhaps it is a bit laconic, but it really expresses a lot. This really applies to me and I'm sure ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: I will Remember
It would be so easy to believe that it could go on forever, but to believe so would be like believing in Santa again. A lovely but impossible religion. I ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Love.
This was really good. I suppose I don't really understand how you can compare the failures of love to death. Death is not a failure. Love isn't always either... Broken ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Forest People Pt. 1
Thank you for the sugestions, JosephDean. :]
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Forest People Pt. 1
The sunlight didn't show through the canopy of green net. A few beams reached the moist earth. I moved my bare soles silently across the floor of brown and green, ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: I Can't Tell You...
"I am going to go for a walk," Is what Marie told her parents. She was going to do what she had said she was, only she wasn't going to ...
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: Chat room love
Good one! :) I love how absolutely true this is.
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Ooh hello. I am like REALLY new to this site, but it looks like a lot of fun! I'm Katrina, or Trina, whichever you preffer. Some people call me Velorexy ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: To Love
Oh goodness love, I got chills. This is great. I love how well you showed the emotion of a grieving family. A lot of us know what its like to ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: An assignment in poetry class.
**The format isn't any particular format. I make art with the way I space lines in poems. >
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Re: Types of Poetic Structure
Its funny actually, I was listening to My Chemical Romance and i realized that one of their songs was in Iambic Pentameter. It was weird that I recognized that. It ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: I tried to write a poem....
Oh goodness, don't we all feel like that sometimes. Haha. I think this speaks for every writer at some point in time! :]
Sep 14, 2008
