running_with_the_devil

Aw I adore this. I would feel so loved if my friends wrote for me. I like the rhymes. They flow, they arent forced, thats good. :) I'm sure you ...

Short, sweet and straight to the point. No beating around the bush. Haha :) Perhaps you could have used a few more interesting words. But other than that I actually ...

The desire, the love for only one. That of a primary state, can't be done. You, dear boy, reside so near to me. But you other boy, remain so dear ...

This was pretty funny. Horrid Henry sounds like a little fiend!!! Haha I would love to read more!!!! :]

Thats really great!!! I like it. A few things... Why is is 'Uncle Charlie'? Wouldnt it be grandpa? And why does she call Carlilse by his first name. Wouldnt he ...

Actually this one is the longest...

Nearly an hour had passed in the river. The dialogue was not so scarce over the course of this hour for I had learned his name. We both decided to ...

Wow. This is so well written. The way it was worded...flawless. :] I didnt really understand why you capitalized somethings... And twenty Oaks could not possess The beauty of a ...

Mmm. Interesting piece. I had issues relating to it because this seems rather religious in which, that isn't me, but I liked it other than that! It was well written ...

AMAZING. I think all kids that grew up in the 90's know what this is about! I love it! I just had a little bit of a flash back right ...

The day was sunny as we sat on the back porch, even thought it was barely 7:30. I didn't exactly want to be awake at this time, but my brother ...

OH GOODNESS! I LOVE THIS! This piece just captured me and makes me wonder what the full story is with Jake and Sam. I loved the way that you went ...

Hmmm.... I suppose I didn't exactly understand some parts of it. For example: (as pale as angels?) or (from the dark clouds outside?) or (to its roots, or slightly above?) ...

I hadn't really consciously realized that we were standing in a river, nor did I care at this point. For the first time since I had spotted him, I looked ...

Ladydark, this is amazing. So...passionate. I am just...amazed at how beautifully written this is. I love the setting as well. You can just image the two in such a dark ...