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Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.1)
The opening line is intriguing and very effective as the reader immediately wants to know what Isadora almost missed. I love the characters relationship and how you describe them both, ...
Oct 1, 2019 -
Re: I Am A Wolf
There's some beautiful imagery that really emphasizes how the wolf is feeling, the layers of description really help to paint the picture. However, I think there's a lack of mystery ...
Oct 1, 2019
