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Six. I'd love to do more but I'm tired, sorry. G'night everyone.

Heylo. Nice work on this piece. Just gonna reiterate a few points. My doctor says i have a problem Capital 'I'. They ask me questions like "what does this mean ...

Hey there. You've got an interesting story. :) I enjoyed reading it. I was able to buy a car, but I personally liked walking, I was able to think more. ...

Heylo. This poem was a wee bit jerky, as others have already said. Alrighty then.. when our eyes met that very first time they held for an eternity unblinking we ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I could imagine the scenes quite vividly thanks to your descriptions. Thank you for that. It was a delight to read. Anyway, ...

G'day. This was a pretty interesting story. GoldenQuill has already mentioned it, but I'll just reiterate the point. When a character speaks, end the dialogue with a comma. So.. “No ...

Hi there. This poem was really good, and there were few mistakes as far as I could tell. I am extremely quire , yet I make sense to me. Did ...

Heylo. Good job with the poem. It was short and sweet and it was delicious to lap up. There was, however, a small mistake. I am the person you do ...

I think this chapter would have more impact if you had described the scenes more vividly. It seems rushed, and the scenes were disjointed. Perhaps you could've spent more time ...

Heylo! Just popping by to give you a quick review. My stomache the butterflies. Spelling error here. :) And sing my heart felt lullibies. I think you meant 'lullabies' right? ...

Hey there. You're my first review in months, so I'm pretty rusty. Hope it's of some help to you though. Firstly, this sentence kinda confuses me. My predator would not ...

Pepperoni!

Well, kind of. (I'll try to come on YWS as much as school and life permits.) School's been really busy and I was having a writing hiatus for a really ...

Howdy! :) The name's Max. Glad to know that you're enjoying yourself on YWS. Please read the 'Rules and Guides' in the 'Help and Support' section. It'll help you answer ...

'Ello! ^^ Welcome to YWS! Here's the rules in case you haven't read 'em yet. :) We're all the same here in YWS. ^^ All looking for peoples' opinions, etc. ...