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Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but once you stop time, you can't start it ever again. I wish I wasn't sick.
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey there. Just a quick review here. Where the words are written but their not spoken Where the words are written but they're not spoken And you don't have to ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Self-Actualization
Hey. The font size makes it look pretty, but unfortunately, it's a little hard to read. Saw that you're thinking of deleting your account. It'll be a pity if you ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Nightmare
Hey there. I'm breaking the whole poem down into stanzas. It'll be easier to read and spot things. :) Everything will be OK. Ill open my eyes another day. Tears ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
I wish I had brownies in the house.
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Internet Telephone
YWS is an amazing place. Franz Kafka deserves a Kafka Day, it would be Kafkaesque. It is fun to eat pizza with friends.
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
Hey there. Here's a quick review. Trapped in this body, about to explode, Gunna spread my soul throughout this world, Without seconds thoughts, or even a doubt, Flowing with the ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: We all knew it
Hey there. I'm going to make a guess and say that this poem is about a strained relationship that finally came to an end? That was the impression I got ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I'm a girl. :smt061 :smt003
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
Oh, Ducky! I like McGee and Tony. :) 9/10!
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: School time dreaming
Hey there! Just a quick review. You dream at school as a way to escape As a way to pass time Wishing to take on a new shape I thought ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Small farm
Hi there. First of all, lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. However, perhaps you could work on your paragraphing? It could just be me, but with your poem in a ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: The Jester
Hey there! First of all, your dad wrote a really nice poem. I'd like to point out the two stanzas that I particularly liked. Woe to you oh wanton fool ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
8/10. :)
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Nickname the user above you!
Orkes
Feb 22, 2011
