rubberduck

Great story! And good job! :) An interesting ending to an interesting story.:)

Mist. Where was all this bloody mist coming from? Cale looked around, disorientated. He didn't recognize his surroundings. "I'm not in the marsh, am I?" he questioned himself aloud. He ...

Suddenly something came into view of the Camera. Suddenly it looked at the camera and with a flick of it's fingers, the battery on the camera suddenly emptied and finally ...

Nice story. :) Work on your paragraphs though. I got a little lost reading it at first. The words looked like they were bunched together. (or maybe it was just ...