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Re: River
Hey there! Welcome to YWS, Ambe! Just a quick reminder: Since you've posted one piece of work, you should review two pieces of work. It'll replenish your points, and allow ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Pebbles, Hero of the Tortoises
One story that I have been told, Tells of Pebbles, brave and bold. Stands behind the garden shed, Slowly, slowly, raises his head. A hero's mask upon his face, He ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Random Circle Story
Stumbled upon this and thought it was a pity it died. So.. *Revives* :elephant: The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for making the Pet Rock inventor a millionaire. (That's one good businessman.)
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Greetings
Hey, you can change your age by clicking 'My YWS', 'Edit Profile Settings' and changing your birth year. Anyway, welcome to YWS! Do you have a nickname we could call ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: A New Born Killer - Deleted
Hey, this was a good poem. I'll nitpick at some things though. I feel i've been contaminated. I 've . And the line should be, ' I feel like I've ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but Summer lasts only for a day. I wish the dishes could wash themselves. (Urgh, chores. D:)
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: I miss you John
Hey there. It's good to pour your emotions out and not bottle them up. (This statement is only applicable if this poem is a true story.) So, here's a review. ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Those 3 words.
Maybe it's your avatar's influence, but I had an image of a beach and a couple on a hammock while I was reading this. So, anyway, review time. The moon ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Internet Telephone
Jumping jacks are fun for jellybeans because they're all jumped up in their jumpers.
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for-- OMG, you're an old timer! Haha. You're banned for calling the kettle black, pot.
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for being eloquent.
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: An ode to 9/11
Hey there. I'll be quoting your poem in made-up stanzas, so it's easier to read. :) And to the terror for which it speaks a rolling bellow now beseaks For ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Hey All!
Hey Dani, welcome to YWS! So, what do you write? Any favourite movies? For me, I write poetry and fantasy. More of the poetry bit right now, though. And I ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but your arms shrink by a few inches too. I wish my rabbits could clean their cage themselves. :/
Mar 15, 2011
