roxywriter1573

Wow. That was really good :) I'm not say anything beyond that. Brava :D Keep on Writing -Roxy

I'm sorry if i offended you, i didn't mean it that way at all. And thank you for the useful advice. I'll be sure to fix it.

Lol thanks so much :) and i will take your thoughts into consideration :D I promise that i will continue to write this one :D Keep on Writing -Roxy

Awwwwww this is so cute! I love love love how you ended it by saying your age! I was like omg! Also, I must admit that i did assume that ...

Wow. That was powerful and i love the ending. Curiosity may have killed the cat, but love killed Callie Miller. i love how you used that. It ties the whole ...

Oh my jellyfis, lmfao daaaaannng! This is the most hilarious one I've read so far. I LOVE your writing style and just wow. Bravo bravo! Since David had the strength ...

"Stephanie, come on!Get out of the car!" Kris yelled. I Turned my face away from the window. He opened the door and pulled me out onto the sidewalk. "K-Kris let ...

Oh my goodness. This story is so so so powerful! I wanted to cry, it's filled with emotion and i can feel how he does. I can see what she ...

Oh my jellyfish! That was really good! I love how you repeated the beginning at the end. There were some grammar mistakes but all in all it was a good ...

Whoah that's awesome!! i love love love the transition from dream to reality XD I'd like to see a continuation of this. -Roxy

PART 2 IS NOW POSTED!!!

“Marie? Marie Jones?” I asked as I transported into her bedroom. It was very small, maybe the size of two small closets. The six year old looked up at me ...

His father forgets his bday

lmfao wow XD i got back on my account and saw 19 notifications lol. 1 was your reply and 18 were the likes for the story XD thanks a bunch ...

I was five years old when I was born. Well, imagined would be the better word. His name was Jacob Anderson. He’d imagined me a week after his fifth birthday. ...