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Angel I'm so excited for school to end. I haven't been this excited about a guy in a long time. He's so cute...no... He's SEXY! I wish I had a ...

Angel I'm so excited for school to end. I haven't been this excited about a guy in a long time. He's so cute...no... He's SEXY! I wish I had a ...

Thanks for the awesome comments guys :) I promise that there's more to these characters than this. I've already got sone writing done. This was just to introduce the characters.

Angel I hate being new. To anywhere. Especially high school. I'm a junior and this is the fourth school I've attended. Somehow I'm caught up with all the things that ...

Oh my goodness, this was such a cute story. It made me tear up a bit because I'm kind of in that situation myself, except it didn't take many months, ...

Wow. Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I feel like I'm her. Like I'm the ugly girl. It almost made me cry to feel like what it is in her shoes ...

This was good, there's just a couple of things that I would like to point out. First, let the police oficcer ease into the information that her family has just ...

Oh my goodness that is AMAZING!! Brava brava! :) So much emotion and I could feel the way she felt. It was amazing :D Keep on Writing -Roxy

Okay, I like this piece. There's a lot of emotion and I could see how much this girl hates this guy. Good job. I would nitpic it but it's hard ...

Hm...i'm liking this already :D Then again, I'm a sucker for romantic stories so...we shall see. Haha. I felt like I was actually reading a book, although there were some ...

Oh my gosh. This is so sad. I'm so sorry. Sometimes I feel the same way, even though my dad is still here in my life. He's a workaholic and ...

Wow that was reaally good. Good job :D There's just a couple of things that i would change just to make the story a little better. here they are: Pitchblack ...

Okay, the whole idea behind the story is really cool and I can't wait for you to finish, but there are a couple of things that I noticed that you ...

okay, so...everything except for the gang and falling in love with this guy is true. He really is a player and he really did do that stuff in the begining ...

Bravo Bravo! Omg awww this is a sad-ish romantic story! I love it and I have no comments to make on it. Wonderful writing :) Great job! Keep on Writing ...