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Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 5/9
Sorry for the late update. Finals were crimping my style. I personally think this part is blah, but it sets up the action for later. Just you wait and see ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 4/9
When we didn’t talk about sex, we played video games. Super Mario World, Halo, even Pokemon--- you name it, we probably played it. When we got closer, he started to ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 3/9
The next day I told Tiffany I would sit at Toby’s table, because he ‘looks kind of bored.’ The truth was that I was bored with Tiffany’s crowd, the seven ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: The Parking Lot Sparrows (1) [Edit 03/04]
This cursed log-in system ate my review! Well, first off. The opening paragraph drew me in. The comparison to Icaruss gave your story a surreal, "dark fariy tale" quality. I ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 2/9
THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS :D! They made my week. Here is an early update in honor of the real V-day! We became friends when I realized that she could do ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 1/9
This story is already finished, but I'll post it in 9 seperate parts. Ethan is actually a little play on the German immigrant stereotype: ridiculously focused, overly analytical and too ...
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 6/6
Sorry for the long wait! I got bogged down due to schoolwork :( Here is the last part of the saga. But I gave this some thought, and I'll begin ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 5/6
I hope this disasterous night together cheers you up ^_^ ~ Roxy We did not strip down that that night, which was probably a mistake on Ethan’s part. His clothes ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
I'm not sure what to say, but WOO it's a new year! Thanks for the warm welcome everyone gave me when joined last year, and special thanks to Gwenevire, Buddadancer, ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: There's Something About Jerry
Part Two cont. In the store there was only a few people. I had been telling the truth about finding a book. I needed to find one by Monday and ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 4/6
Sorry I didn't update last weekend... I was living it up in Las Vegas :D ... without my beloved internet :cry:. Here's 4/6: The first few hours we don’t talk ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: There's Something About Jerry
Jerry sounds like hot stuff! Overall, this is a great first post. The part on the narrator's friend trying to keep up with the rich crowd hit close to home. ...
Dec 18, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 3/6
I was kind of confused on how to edit this part. I hope this is okay :? Our school has a basement. It’s pretty much forgotten about, but I go ...
Dec 16, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 2/6
Oh, hehe, the pussy comment is actually a nudge to Chinese prostitution. Gay guys can and do talk about vaginas, they just usually don't do it when women are around ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: Vengeance Is Beautiful - Prologue
She screeched and wriggled in pain but with no luck, she remained on the edge of her life. Each second brought her closer to her demise. Your descriptive passage was ...
Dec 10, 2007
