rothwise

Really good and kind of deep if you think about it the right way. I really like it and I'm glad you wrote it, although I wish the poem was ...

this is really really really good :) i think you're trying to use "bigger" vocabulary too hard though. You can get the same effect from smaller vocabulary if you just ...

Its basically the same thing over and over again, but i do feel the depth of the poem and how you can really relate to it if you think about ...