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Maybe? I am packing to go to the airport Though Missouri's tide may majestic glide, Good husbands make unhappy wives Or no?

I have never been the subject of a poem, at least not that I know of. So because of this fact alone, perhaps I'm biased in my opinions. Actually, I ...

Gladius, Her cousin has his own kingdom to the north, Lotharia.

OK! Now that we've got past all the "Don't do _____________!", let's get to business shall we? Poetry critique is rarely, if ever, based on fact. It's all a matter ...

This does nothing for me whatsoever. Poetry is not taking a strong emotion like hate and turning it into a random insignificant list of sentences. It's a little more of ...

Welcome to YWS. This isn't peotry, of course. So use proper punctuation. I'm sure it's not news to you that the beginning of every sentence should be capalatized. I don't ...

As previously said, the imagery is very strong. (I feel as if one could never hear a compliment too many times.) Since the focus on imagery is so strong, you ...

Trent clocked himself out, and stepped outside. He reached in his coat pocket to find his cigarettes. “Hey,” a car pulled up beside him. Claire leaned over the passenger seat. ...

Matisyn raised an eyebrow. "And suddenly you care?" "Or course not," Sid said, half-amused, and half iritated. "I have no interest in the affairs of mortals, and much less in ...

Trent clocked himself out, and stepped outside. He reached in his coat pocket to find his cigarettes. “Hey,” a car pulled up beside him. Claire leaned over the passenger seat. ...

Meanwhile, somewhere in the city of Galesburg "Good evening, my lord. What do I owe this late night visit?" "I apologize, Sister. I know the hour is late. I would ...

Matisyn had not even thought of where to begin. Whoever was responsible for this would pay for it in blood. But finding the culprit would be no easy task. "For ...

The door knocker sounded and Daryis jumped up to answer it, but before he had reached the door, his visitor had already invited himself in. "How'd you get access to ...

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