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Re: London Riots
Economic crash, Dissent and unrest prevail, Grumblings grow louder. Tempers flaring up, Citizens take to the streets, Words become actions. Hooded thugs, vandals, Petrol bombs and football tops, Molot
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: The Curse of the Trencavels Part I
This was...disturbing. That is all.
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Friends, Dreams and Training (Chapter 2)
Noah lay in his bed, staring up at the ceiling. His clock said 5am, his eyes were wide open and the hammering of his heart was seemingly increasing in tempo ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Friends, Dreams and Pokemon Training (Chapter 1)
Note: This story takes place between the main Kanto story-line and the main Johto story-line, after Koga leaves the Gym to join the Elite Four. It focuses on Noah and ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Isolation (Chapter 1)
Actually guys, this was just my first draft. I didn't mean to submit it, only to save it. I did some more work and extended it to around 5-6 paragraphs, ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Gillia's God 2
I like it. I like the story as a whole, but it does need a lot of work. You have quite a few spelling errors that NSND missed but I ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Planet of the Lost - Part 2: The Wraiths
First off, I'm really getting into these stories. Secondly, you're getting a lot better. And now to jump straight in! We manage to scrounge together a camp, lighting fires from ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Planet of the Lost - Part 1: The Crash
This is going to be more of a review of a review, I'm afraid as I really don't agree with most of Kafkaescenses comments/corrections, but I hope it helps! Kafkaescense, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Decision Process
"Look guys", said I, "We've got a distinct lack of any facial movement or even verbal response. What are we going to do?" The Logician amongst us piped up, "Are ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: The Silver Dragon (1)
I really enjoyed reading this, as the quality of punctuation, spelling, grammar, plot, characterization and everything really is of stupendously high quality. I think that the 'nitpicks' pointed out w
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: The leigionary
Hey, I was browsing through His-Fic, and when I saw your story named 'The Legionary' I had to read it. I've always been interested in books based on Roman Warfare, ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Isolation (Chapter 1)
Till death do us part , I thought, as the one girl I loved passed on to the next world, with me holding her hand and a fiberglass spear through ...
Mar 14, 2011
