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Re: Experimentals (Started/closed)
Age: 14 Gender: Male Name and subject number: Link, subject 01150. Appearance: Small and wiry, Link has a fuzz of hair so dark that it seems to absorb sunlight. It ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Scottish history
That's a ridiculously broad question. What time period were you thinking?
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: I need a potentially controversional Book/Quote
Little bit of Julius Caesar? 'Cry, "Havoc", and let slip the dogs of war' I've never read it, but I know that quote.
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Nuclear Fallout
- What would happen if a person entered a highly irradiated zone? How immediate would death be, and what would the death involve in itself? Radiation is all about chance. ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Rednecking in Europe
Well. I'm from Scotland and can I say that what you're asking is very vague. Me personally, I like: reading, playing computer games, chatting to my friends, and going to ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Roman Soldier
Hey, I'd like to clear some things up if you don't mind. Roman's could worship any God they wanted. Ever. You say that you're setting it in Jerusalem? You'd probably ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Apocalypse: What now? Chapter 4 part 1
Once again, an excellent piece. There are a couple little typo's here and there, but nothing too major. However, Erick's speech seems kind of rushed, and he changes from confidant ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Hadrian's Wall: Legio VI Ferrata
Marcus hefted another stone up to his Centurion, Brutus. Whilst he placed it on top of the others to await mortaring, Marcus surveyed the other eighty-one men in his century ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Apocalypse: what now? Chapter 3 part 2
Again, very good. Just as I've come to expect! It was pretty short compared to the rest of your work so far, but I suppose that's just due to it ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Bull**** story
What? Seriously, what? I get that the story is meant to be a joke, with Vikas saying the punchline at the end, but it was seriously hard to read. The ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: A Play of Roses
Hmmm, I'm not too sure what to think of this, to be honest with you. I just feel like the plot was a bit too predictable, and that very little ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: A Play of Roses
The one below. I meant to click preview on this one.
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Apocalypse:What now? Chapter 1
This was awesome. There really isn't anything I can advise you to improve on, and I only found a single typo, and that's honestly just a matter of preference. The ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Fire
This was great! I really enjoyed reading it, and was drawn into the story as I got further through it. However, there are a few spelling and grammatical typos that ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Lilac and blood part 1.
I'm, uh. I'm going to nit-pick this. And I'm going to be harsh. Sorry. " Romeo , tall and bold, can I , shall I be yours?" Lilac asked . ...
Sep 10, 2011
