roostangarar

Okay, I don't want anything in return, it's just that I have no motivation when it comes to reviewing anything. So! If you want something reviewed I will be happy ...

And I've brought back Nimsi. Literally. Link comes around slowly, like a whale gracefully breaching the surface of the ocean. That's if there were any whales left in the seas. ...

Is this Halo 4?

I am going to nitpick this. Statement of fact. I will be harsh. Another one. THIS IS HILARIOUS!!. Last one. Level 1 : Press Start Jay did spend the night ...

I edited my post guys. Sorry about that. And I'm not gonna post again until after Gleek has. I want to see how Britt reacts before I have Link wake ...

I don't know how long I've been lying on this bench, only that over time the lights have gotten brighter and Dr. Crawford's talking has become harder to understand. It's ...

Link didn't struggle as he was strapped to a different table than Nimsi and Micah. Micah glanced at him before he scrunched his eyes up and turned away, then he ...

I don't think there's much I can say that hasn't already been mentioned by someone else. It is a good story, but still has a few spelling and grammatical errors ...

I don't know if I hate you or love you right now. Yes this piece is incredible. But it's going to be an absolute nightmare to review because it's so ...

Link. I watch as the pretty blonde doctor enters the cell with a pair of guards. She glances around at the remaining kids, then spots me. I instantly know she's ...

Thanks very much!

I've just joined my first storybook (Exciting, I know) and as I was browsing all the possibilities I noticed something being referred to as "Mary/Gary Sues". What I'm wondering is, ...

Link watches as Micah, then Nimsi, are taken away. He notices Nimsi's teddy-bear drop out of her hand as she is dragged out of the room, and crawls over to ...

Okay, this is quite good. You're a reasonable talented writer from what I picked up, but I noticed that you've been comma splicing. You've used (roughly) a comma for every ...

Banned for missing out a full-stop.