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Hello, Roon once again! Wow… erm, I think this is the least believable of all your chapters, if I’m honest… I’ll start with nitpicks, and then explain why. Not sleeping ...

Roon, again! Kevin left Arnold sitting in his chair. He walked over to the officer, who was pointing to a dark object attached to the wall. Dark object? Be a ...

Heehee, this will be my 100th post! Yay! Anyways… nitpicking! Arnold read and reread the smoldering paper that he found on the ground. I think by this time it has ...

Hello, Roon again, sorry about the wait, today was a big day! Nitpicks: The sunlight peeked through the blinds and streamed into Arnold’s eyes. He stirred, waving at the sunlight ...

Roon again! I hope the last review was helpful. I’ll start with nitpicks. The splattered blood on the wall slowly dripped downward, and the corpse of the fallen officer continued ...

Hello, Roon here, at your request! I may not get all 7 chapters reviewed today lol! I have a free day tomorrow though, so I will get it done! The ...

Okay, Pretty Crazy, your review is done! On to Flemzo's novel! ~ Roon

Hello there! Roon here; at your request! This is really intriguing, I’m hooked already! Anyways, nitpicks first! ‘That, is the last time I go shopping.’ He thought. Lowercase for the ...

Crocksylocksy, I’m back again! I loved it, again, you’re incredible! I’m going to steal your brain…Nitpicks! You are probably confused now. You are probably thinking, ‘How can she be dead ...

Afeefah's story finished! It was wonderful, don't put your work down, I enjoyed it immensely! Any other takers? ~ Roon

Hello, Roon here, at your request, thank you for being my first customer! First of all, it’s not boring, it’s really good! I’m going to commence with nitpicking now: There’s ...

Wow, that is a lot of emoticons o.O lol! Anways, I‘m Roon and I‘m here to review! I think this poem has a lot of potential. I’m going to start ...

Hello, I’m Roon! I want to improve my review skills, help people with their writing, study other people’s writing styles, etc! that’s why I’m posting, I’d really like to have ...

Hello, I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Your poem caught my eye, so I thought I’d review! Nitpicks: Me and you, Were a song. You play my heart; I sing ...

Wow, this is so good, I'm hopeless when it comes to editing images you see! A few little things though: The thumb looks weird, slightly. Also,even with the 3D effect, ...