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Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
:D Hey there! You don't have to, and if you do, you don't have to straight away, but can you review this: I'm unsure about the title... ~ Roon EDIT: ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Counting down the seconds
Hello, Roon here, at your request! Hope some of this helps, nitpicks first: Sand trickles through my fingers as time goes by. And it soon starts to pour as the ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Forgotten.
Hello. I’m Roon, this just came to me this morning when I was scribbling in my maths book, trying my hardest to concentrate, c’mon, homework before the year even starts? ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Secret
Hello, Roon here! Okay, so I couldn’t actually find any spelling mistakes, in the bits where you’re saying “you want to know a secret” I’d put a do in front. ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: some old drawing
Hello, I’m Roon! This is amazing! Wow, you get the shadows and lighting perfectly! I agree with ThornedRose on the dot idea. Also, could you make it a little smaller, ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: The Space Inbetween
Roon here, I really like this, I can really relate, which is what a poem needs to do! I only have one nitpick and that is the spelling of inbetween, ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Vampyres, prt 3.
Roonytoon, here again! *noms on story* Love it, you never cease to amaze me with your talent! Nitpicks: Sweet, glorious, warm, delicious, addicting blood. Addictive. The strongest emotion had been ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Escaping Love PG-13
Hello, Roon here! Another wonderful poem! Nitpicks first though! She always needed a fight We were never right So there I sat in the endless night Reminesing on my needless ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Roonytoon’s review residence!
Done, done, done, more? :D ~ Roon
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Eleven Days In Hell #7
Hello, Roon again! Nitpicks, as usual, come first! No body was found, and there didn’t appear to be any disturbance in the glass pieces, so they had no idea where ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Crying Over You
Hello, Roon here, at your request! I really like this, your emotion comes through very clearly, but I will start with nitpicks! I saw it in your bright green eyes
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: A Lost Soul (working title) - Chapter 2
Hello! Roon here, sorry for the wait, my computer was in a mood with me! Anyway, here is my review, thanks for posting on my thread. I will start with ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: The Days of Innocence
Hello, Roon here, at your request. I’m no expert on lyrics, by any means, but I will give it a shot! Nitpicks: I never thought I’d feel this way I ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Sonnet 2
Hello, Roon here! Your first reviewer! :O I’m going to start with nitpicks, then move on to an overall idea of the poem. You are my hope, my heart, my ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Roonytoon’s review residence!
I have done parts one to six of Flemzo's novel. To be honest, today was a big day, so I didn't get as much done as I could have. All ...
Aug 27, 2009
