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  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

    :D Hey there! You don't have to, and if you do, you don't have to straight away, but can you review this: I'm unsure about the title... ~ Roon EDIT: ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Counting down the seconds

    Hello, Roon here, at your request! Hope some of this helps, nitpicks first: Sand trickles through my fingers as time goes by. And it soon starts to pour as the ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten.

    Hello. I’m Roon, this just came to me this morning when I was scribbling in my maths book, trying my hardest to concentrate, c’mon, homework before the year even starts? ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Secret

    Hello, Roon here! Okay, so I couldn’t actually find any spelling mistakes, in the bits where you’re saying “you want to know a secret” I’d put a do in front. ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: some old drawing

    Hello, I’m Roon! This is amazing! Wow, you get the shadows and lighting perfectly! I agree with ThornedRose on the dot idea. Also, could you make it a little smaller, ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Space Inbetween

    Roon here, I really like this, I can really relate, which is what a poem needs to do! I only have one nitpick and that is the spelling of inbetween, ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Vampyres, prt 3.

    Roonytoon, here again! *noms on story* Love it, you never cease to amaze me with your talent! Nitpicks: Sweet, glorious, warm, delicious, addicting blood. Addictive. The strongest emotion had been ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Escaping Love PG-13

    Hello, Roon here! Another wonderful poem! Nitpicks first though! She always needed a fight We were never right So there I sat in the endless night Reminesing on my needless ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Roonytoon’s review residence!

    Done, done, done, more? :D ~ Roon

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Eleven Days In Hell #7

    Hello, Roon again! Nitpicks, as usual, come first! No body was found, and there didn’t appear to be any disturbance in the glass pieces, so they had no idea where ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Crying Over You

    Hello, Roon here, at your request! I really like this, your emotion comes through very clearly, but I will start with nitpicks! I saw it in your bright green eyes

    Aug 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Lost Soul (working title) - Chapter 2

    Hello! Roon here, sorry for the wait, my computer was in a mood with me! Anyway, here is my review, thanks for posting on my thread. I will start with ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: The Days of Innocence

    Hello, Roon here, at your request. I’m no expert on lyrics, by any means, but I will give it a shot! Nitpicks: I never thought I’d feel this way I ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sonnet 2

    Hello, Roon here! Your first reviewer! :O I’m going to start with nitpicks, then move on to an overall idea of the poem. You are my hope, my heart, my ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Roonytoon’s review residence!

    I have done parts one to six of Flemzo's novel. To be honest, today was a big day, so I didn't get as much done as I could have. All ...

    Aug 27, 2009


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind