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Crocks! I sat down to read this so many times before I stopped getting interrupted. Sorry about that. Well I’ve read it about four times anyway. I think, in terms ...

Hello there, Roon here! I think you have a nice beginning, but hopefully you can make it better! I’m going to start by quoting bits that need a change, hope ...

Hello there! I'm going to start with nitpicks! This was excellent. Bubbles was the first to go. This was a good way to start, it really grabs the attention of ...

Hello, Roon here, as requested! Thank you for replying to my thread! I’m going to start with nitpicks. Not the morning lights or the dying days.

Hello there! Roon here! This was great, really caught my eye, on with the nitpicks! Dedication shows, Perspiration leading to success.

Hello, Roon here! I like the idea you have here, I think it needs just a little development, and it could be wonderful. With an iron mask he walks,

Done and done! More... I feed on reviews... mwahahaha! Ahem... Seriously, I love to review! ~ Roon

Hello, Roon here! I actually had to rewrite this review, as my computer ran out of juice just as I was about to post it. I actually almost threw it ...

Wow, these are so artistic, they’re stunning. I like the first one the best, I don’t know why. I think it’s because of the angle and focus you use. Also, ...

Hello, Roon here! This really caught my eye, I’ll start with nitpicking! Kiss me softly. Let the water fall.

Hello there! I’m Roon, nice to meet you, I’ll start with nitpicks! She sits alone

I love the first one, it's simplistic and beautiful. I think you should make it a little smaller though, so we can see the whole thing at once, without scrolling. ...

Hello! I’m Roon! I’m going to start with nitpicks! Lies begin with truth

Hello, Roon here! This caught my eye. It’s a nice poem, but it needs a little work. Nitpicks! When did this life become so pointless

Hello, Roon here! I think you have a wonderful idea here, but the repetition just eats it up, for me. I find it hard to concentrate on the poem when ...