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Hello, thanks for the review, this is good, you have a great storyline here, sustainable and interesting. Minor problems I would point out though: We had a strong and unbreakable ...

I like it, it's a good start, which engages the readers attention, I'm a little worried about the amount of kids though! This could lead into many possibilities, allowing yours ...

I love this, it made me smile! I think it's a good laugh and I enjoyed it thoroughly! I love this bit For a student whose homework was dropped in ...

I think this is fantastic, I really enjoyed this, the way you presented the mad psychiatrist is absolutely wonderful! I imagine the years of people’s insanity rubbing off on him ...

The poem has a sort of upbeat feel to it, maybe because of the rhyming pattern and the rhythm it has, or the "should be against the law" I don't ...

This is incredible, and you say it's just a doodle? Wow, I'm green with envy! How long were you bored for? This really puts me to shame... Well I can't ...

Hello! My name's Roon, erm I'm new, and as you've probably noticed from that opening statement I have a tendancy to state the obvious! this site was recommended to me ...

Okay, this is really bad, so if you're reading this I'm sorry for the waste of the next few seconds of your life if, that is if you go on ...

I think this is fantastic, your imagination makes us run wild alongside it! The only minor flaws that I can see, which some may disagree with are the use of ...

Hi, I really like this poem I think you have a great vocabulary and poetic flair, especially for your age, a few things I would point out though: You said ...